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Dec 06, 2007 04:56pm
Vizon
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And I will begin with some random doodles I did last night. Hopefully I will get a new scanner soon so these uploads will be a little cleaner.
"Wherever there is a corpse, there the vultures will gather."
- Jesus Christ
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Dec 06, 2007 09:32pm
Fru
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Holy cripes ... I loove your sketching. :3 So unique.
And I love sketches in ballpoint pen! It's like my favourite medium ... ^^
These look awesome ... I look forward to more!!
http://fru.deviantart.com
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Dec 06, 2007 10:28pm
KoOkY!
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Cool Vizon, can't wait to see more of your stuff. Man that's pretty trippy. ^.^ I love seeing sketches more than finish artwork sometimes, seems more....raw or something.
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Dec 07, 2007 11:33am
Vizon
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KoOkY! said: Cool Vizon, can't wait to see more of your stuff. Man that's pretty trippy. ^.^ I love seeing sketches more than finish artwork sometimes, seems more....raw or something.
Well they're definitely...raw. I almost didn't post them, but as the sketch book is about posting even embarrassing stuff, and having others perhaps see common issues, I went ahead. Maybe I'll do some real life sketches next. And thanks, you two. :)
"Wherever there is a corpse, there the vultures will gather."
- Jesus Christ
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Dec 07, 2007 11:45am
KoOkY!
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Vizon said: Well they're definitely...raw. I almost didn't post them, but as the sketch book is about posting even embarrassing stuff, and having others perhaps see common issues, I went ahead. Maybe I'll do some real life sketches next. And thanks, you two. :)
Oh well I meant raw in a good way! Hehe. Like seeing construction lines and the buildup of other people's artwork I think is really cool. And nothing to be embarrassed about there, though I get what you mean. :)
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Dec 08, 2007 11:54am
Vizon
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I would like to post these preliminary sketches of Vizon (see my Vizon Rok portrait in Critique and Redlines) to try to get a better understanding of what I am specifically not getting when sketching without references. I am so frustrated with myself, because I can see they are bad and wrong - too stiff and not natural looking, but despite my extensive experience with figure-drawing classes, it seems as soon as I stop taking the classes, my figures become stiff and forced again. So here are my sketches that I did at first when I decided to draw Vizon, kicked back in a chair, glaring:

I am particularly displeased with the top right sketches. I know the propped up leg is too short (as it came to the edge of the paper too soon), but it's more than that. Both sketches look like he's not really relaxed. And a lot of my sketches end up being blah like this. It really bugs me. I guess for the moment the best thing I can do is sign up for more figure drawing classes and go sketching at the zoo more. Just draw more. But if someone knows of something specifically they see in my sketches that I should be working more on, please please tell me.
"Wherever there is a corpse, there the vultures will gather."
- Jesus Christ
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Dec 09, 2007 05:54pm
KoOkY!
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Not sure if this is what you're looking for, but my initial reaction to the upper right sketches is that there isn't enough of a slouch in the back to show 'relaxed'. Kinda sitting more stiff-back upright and maybe the hips aren't forward enough in the chair. If you were asking how to fix it....dunno if can help there. ^.^ But the image you have over on the red-line forum looks a lot better and a much more relaxed curve in the spine.
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Dec 09, 2007 10:11pm
Vizon
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Yeah. Maybe I just need to get back into figure drawing class again and focus on spine/hip relationships and placement. I think maybe what I'm doing is getting into the details before establishing the gist of the pose...
"Wherever there is a corpse, there the vultures will gather."
- Jesus Christ
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Dec 10, 2007 08:42pm
Higgins Dragon
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Foo, I meant to post the YouTube vids here. Gah, sorry about that. :) They help out all the same, no matter which topic they're posted in.
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Dec 11, 2007 09:32am
Vizon
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Higgins Dragon said: Foo, I meant to post the YouTube vids here. Gah, sorry about that. :) They help out all the same, no matter which topic they're posted in.
Thanks, Higgins! I have the day off from work unexpectedly (er...yay ice storms?), so I think I will watch these videos and see what I can learn. :)
"Wherever there is a corpse, there the vultures will gather."
- Jesus Christ
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Dec 11, 2007 11:48am
chlorophyta
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Higgins, could you cross-post the vids you're talking about? I'm a little confused and intrigued!
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Dec 13, 2007 10:07pm
Vizon
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"Wherever there is a corpse, there the vultures will gather."
- Jesus Christ
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Dec 19, 2007 01:30pm
Vizon
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Last update until after Christmas:
A beginning sketch of Jackie Noose, my brother's fictional assassin character. Still not sure what to do with her left hand. I originally had her gun there before I realized she's probably not left handed. I'm thinking maybe a grenade pin.
Another stab at Jackie's unique face. She's a forty-year-old, lean-muscled woman with a Roman nose and defined cheekbones. I think maybe the chin's a little too pointy for a woman? Well I'll see what my bro thinks. Hmmm, shoulda fixed the shading at the edge of the eye...

I was at Petco, getting litter and aspen chips for my critters and taking pictures of ferrets feet and mice for photo reference when I visited the birds and felt compelled to sketch this little guy:

Sparse update...I've been pretty busy preparing for Christmas. See you all after the holiday!
"Wherever there is a corpse, there the vultures will gather."
- Jesus Christ
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Jan 13, 2008 05:19pm
Vizon
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Here's the first of my daily challenge from Undying Song that is to last a week. Hopefully I'll keep up. I drew this without any references, so that's why it's such wonky weird anatomy. Something's still up with that lady's lifted leg I know.
I need to get back into figure drawing class again (sigh).
Dictionary.com's Word of the Day, Sunday: supplicate
"Wherever there is a corpse, there the vultures will gather."
- Jesus Christ
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Jan 16, 2008 09:05pm
Vizon
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Getting behind...
Here's Monday's word, Primogeniture:
"Wherever there is a corpse, there the vultures will gather."
- Jesus Christ
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Jan 16, 2008 09:51pm
Vizon
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And Tuesday's, which is more digital than I'd prefer (not to mention unoriginal), but it's getting late and I need sleep - Inculcate:
(Edit: D'oh...it's "I MUST not tell lies" darn it...I should have known I'd forget something important if I drew this late. Oh and it seems I forgot a wrist bone there too... :P Meh.)
"Wherever there is a corpse, there the vultures will gather."
- Jesus Christ
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Jan 17, 2008 08:36am
Vizon
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Another doodle dump:

"Wherever there is a corpse, there the vultures will gather."
- Jesus Christ
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Jan 17, 2008 06:52pm
Fru
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Your doodles never fail to amuse me =D Especially that chicken-eating guy and the fat kiwi bird. Awesome!!
http://fru.deviantart.com
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Jan 17, 2008 07:25pm
Vizon
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Fru said: Your doodles never fail to amuse me =D Especially that chicken-eating guy and the fat kiwi bird. Awesome!!
Heh! Thanks, Fru! Doodles are the one thing that will keep coming no matter what kind of art slump I might be in. Have to keep my hands busy when I'm sitting still. You should have seen my history notes back in high school, ha ha ha.
"Wherever there is a corpse, there the vultures will gather."
- Jesus Christ
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Jan 17, 2008 09:08pm
Vizon
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Here's yesterday/Wednesday's word of the day - Nonagenarian:
"Wherever there is a corpse, there the vultures will gather."
- Jesus Christ
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