ArtSpots Forum Topic - critique on a sitting dragon

EosFoxx

Wed, 11 Jun 2008 10:59:27 -0000

thank you Hrath ^^ thank you Vizon I changed the wing a little. I made them bigger. Is this big enough? I am unsure how the other wing has to look like. The blue lines shoul symbol this. Is it okay like that? (sorry for the bad english)

Vizon

Fri, 25 Apr 2008 05:38:06 -0000

I don't have time to really do any sort of in-depth critique, but my first impression when I saw this was that he looks like a huge, heavy, powerful beast the way you've drawn him with such thick legs and broad sauropodian chest. But as such his wings seem a bit inadequate to support such a massive body (even if his bones are hollow like a birds - that's a lot of muscle bulk). Is there a way at this stage that you could increase the size of the wings? Maybe double what they are now? http://www.zbrushcentral.com/zbc/attachment.php?attachmentid=78029 http://www.elfwood.com/farp/dragons/dhroar.jpg

Hrath (Dracora)

Fri, 25 Apr 2008 00:02:22 -0000

Ooh! It looks great! I wonder what that dragon's thinking...

EosFoxx

Wed, 23 Apr 2008 10:26:49 -0000

hello :) I am searching for a critique on the pose of this dragon. I am unsure if it is right or wrong (the same with the little wolf. If you have decissions that may make the coloring better please also let me know. I would not like to start this picture completely new, so critiques that help saving this picture are prefered :) Thank you for the help